We had now been about ten minutes upon the top of Helseggen, to which we had ascended from the interior of Lofoden, so that we had caught no glimpse of the sea until it had burst upon us from the summit. As the old man spoke, I became aware of a loud and gradually increasing sound, like the moaning of a vast herd of buffaloes upon an American prairie; and at the same moment I perceived that what seamen term the chopping character of the ocean beneath us, was rapidly changing into a current which set to the eastward. Even while I gazed, this current acquired a monstrous velocity. Each moment added to its speed—to its headlong impetuosity. In five minutes the whole sea, as far as Vurrgh, was lashed into ungovernable fury; but it was between Moskoe and the coast that the main uproar held its sway. Here the vast bed of the waters, seamed and scarred into a thousand conflicting channels, burst suddenly into phrensied convulsion—heaving, boiling, hissing—gyrating in gigantic and innumerable vortices, and all whirling and plunging on to the eastward with a rapidity which water never elsewhere assumes except in precipitous descents.

PS Кто будет пользоваться чужим переводом, тому сразу скатертью по жопе.

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Неудачно выбрал размер шрифта АнимеАс, так как он намного больше предыдущего и оттягивает внимание не себя.
Кавычки надо заменять на ёлочки.

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Некоторые переносы явно лишние.
В последней реплике надо тире ставить, а не минус.

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Опять ненужные переносы.
Японское многоточие осталось.
Кавычки.

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Неправильный (да и ненужный) перенос "деду-шка".

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Ненужные переносы.
Не висит многоточие в первой реплике.
Японское многоточие осталось.

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Кавычки.
Неправильный перенос "испо-льзует".
Три шрифта для реплик на одной странице - перебор.